I’m still wrestling over Chapter 15. The second draft has a lot of highlights and breaks and splitting dialogue options… it’s essentially become an angry squid that I’m trying to pin down. Whatever happens, I won’t be posting it tonight. Ideally, I get it managed tonight and then post Monday after rereading it with fresh eyes, but no promises.
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Okay, I understand….get it how it needs to be. I’m excited to continue reading, but only as you intend it to be read!🤩